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Ameliorating A's avatar

Wowww!! This was such a impactful poem bhai. You definitely deserved the first prize.. the last two lines literally hurt reading. You're great, Sana. This was really very deep, and beautifully written.

Really amazing 🤌🏻🤌🏻✨✨✨

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Awiiee thankyou Ammu 🥹💕

THE SILK GAZETTE-Mansi Ranga's avatar

Loved reading it Sana

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Thankyou Mansi, it means alot 😭🫶

Theo's avatar

I feel bad for everyone else that competed they had no chance

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STOBIT ಥ⁠‿⁠ಥ

Becca Behnke's avatar

Such sweet sentiment.

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Thankyou 🥹

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This is stunning Sana! Allahumma Barik. 🥹

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Thank you Rimsha 🫶🤭

Aster solenne's avatar

OMG! Such an amazing piece!! It's soo beautifully written grl! Keep writing yuh never fail to surprise me! I absolutely love this piece and lily is one of my fav flowers as well, signifying purity, love and rebirth. And I think it's beautiful for this piece.💖

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Thank you Aster, your words always helps me to keep going 🫶🥹

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This is literally the best way one can portray a vast subject as a poetry. I loveeeeeeeeeeee this style Sana. Thank god it won't first place, otherwise I would have to invent time travel (lol)❤️

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😆😆 Thankyou Pearrrl ~

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❤️😘

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Why can't I restack though😭

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Poetry setting doesn't allow restacking specific sentences, you will have to restack the post itself 😭😭

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Stack be ridiculous for this!!!!!

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So so beautifully written sana 🥹🫶 talent shuru se hi hai aap mein toh 🩷🤭✨

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Bus phir Aisa likhne ki tamanna hai 🤭👉👈

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Arey aap ab bhi itna hi pyaara likhti ho 🤭✨ convent ladkiya toh hoti hi bhot haseen zaheen hain 🤭✨

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Aray aray araay bachpan main bhe itna dimagh chalta tha? Kiya shaahkaar hay… zabardast bhae 🥹👏

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Aray 😭🤭

Hufrana Ashraf's avatar

Beautiful ❤️